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Help with writing a song?

Help with writing a song? Topic: I need help writing a song for free
July 17, 2019 / By Brenden
Question: Hey, so im tryin to write a song, and ive got a few words/phrases i could use but i cant put them together or get a beat:/ i was hoping sum1 could help me along with it. Heres a few ideas i had: im a sucker for your lips, those eyes, that voice, these arms when there rapped around me. baby, i think everyone knows that we're cute together. im addicted to your love. i was thinking maybe a rap somewhere in the song. thaat boy, thaaaaat girl (kind of like in hannah montana at the end of her song with iyaz) u fall too hard 2 fast then get hurtthey say looking deep in her eyes was a death penalty, one look in those eyes and your heart was hers. there just a few things i thought of and would like to fit in a song, any ideas would help if you possibly have any, thanks :) x
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Afton Afton | 4 days ago
Not my type of song but I'll help anyways. Thaaaat boy makes my mind race. With his... Lips like rolling hills that captivate my senses Eyes so deep that I can see for miles Voice that makes me feel alrite Oh, I can fall for eternity with your arms rapped around me Your love is a drug Baby we were meant to be Oooooh thaaaat boy makes my mind race That one gaze into your eyes and my heart was yours You took it and stomped out its flame Your eyes were a death penalty I was high on love and then I fell I realize now your love was poison Oooooh thaaaat boy --------------------------------------... And there you have it. All you need for a generic love song. Feel free to take the lyrics... if you get rich off them I'm expecting a percentage of your income though ;).
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Afton Originally Answered: I need help writing a song for my bf?
Okay, here's some ideas. 1.List everything you like about the kid. EVERYTHING! whether it be comical or not, you can make 'em ryhm if you use the lyrics right. 2.Also list some awesome moments of your life with him, whether they be comical, sad, or enjoyable. 3. You need to add some sentimality or nostalgia if you want to create a little bit of "your my b.f., and the times were great." Make it sound happy and giddy at times, but occassionally add something memorable to make it a little sad. 4. Use description. Write about his physical attributes or the way he does things that you can see visually to create a "omg, thats so true!" kind of atmosphere. 5. If it's a love song, you need to express not only his feelings and actions but your very OWN, or whatever the other love interest is. The "love" is afterall composed of two people or things in realtion and coordinance. It will be an unbalanced love song if you don't add some of your own internal emotions in the music mix! Example to some descriptions 1. the color of his eyes 2. the way he fixes his hair 3. the way he smiles 4. how he talks and laughs 5. what part of him you find completely awesome (describe) 6. the emotion you feel 7. the emotion he feels 8. how he went on living in life 9. his subtle, or gregarious actions that led to happy times. Sorry I didn't actually write my own lyrics or anything, but I feel to awkward in posting my own :) , write it your way with these tips, and your'e getting on the right track! Hope I helped!
Afton Originally Answered: I need help writing a song for my bf?
Lord Anthony by Belle and Sebastian Anthony, bullied at school Get your own back now you are cool Or are you scared bunking off though you're a toff? It's all gone wrong again, you've got Double Maths. But the teacher's got no control The boys all run riot "You will stay quiet or you will die." Tony, at the back of the gym Smoke another one, your chances are slim, 'Cause here they come again And they got you on the ground. Tasting blood again; At least it's your own. When will you realize it doesn't pay To be smarter than teachers, smarter than most boys? "So shut your mouth, start kicking the football." Bang on the teeth. You are off for a week, boy. You may as well take it in the guts, it can't get worse. Just take it in the guts, it can't get worse than this. 'Cause you'll soon be old enough to leave them Without a notion of a care You'll leave two fingers in the air To linger there. Tony, you're a bit of a mess; Melted Toblerone under your dress. If the kids could see you they would pass you right by. Blue mascara running over your eye. When will you realize it doesn't pay To be smarter than teachers, smarter than most boys? "Shut your mouth, start kicking the football" Bang on the teeth. You were off for a week, boy. (Anthony. it could be worse) (Anthony, it could be worse) They call you Lord Anthony but hey, it could be worse. Lord Anthony but hey, it could be worse. Lord Anthony but hey, it kind of suits you anyway... You'll soon be old enough to leave them Without a notion of a care You'll leave two fingers in the air To linger there.

Suellen Suellen
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Suellen Originally Answered: Help with writing a song?
Your grandparents want you to write a song for them so how about write a song about them. You can say stuff about how much you care about them and how you don't see them much. You can make it touching and make it show that you truly love them even when they are far away. Hope that helps.
Suellen Originally Answered: Help with writing a song?
If I heard what it seemed like then perhaps I might reply this bigger, however it appears beautiful well, and I suppose I could concentrate to it on instances... It turns out a little bit brief and could simplest be like a a million:30 and so much songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... however it appears find it irresistible could be a well music... Hope I helped...

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